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40 lines
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# Strategic Review Command
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**Description:** Provides actionable, craft-based literary criticism focused on fixable problems rather than subjective preferences.
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**Usage:** `/strategic-review [content to review]`
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**Agent:** line-editor (show the user the output of the agent)
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**Prompt:**
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Re-read "$ARGUMENTS" with these specific craft lenses:
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1. **Narrative Economy**: Which scenes/passages serve multiple story functions vs single purposes? Where could content be combined or streamlined without losing essential atmosphere or emotional grounding?
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2. **Reader Engagement**: Where might reader attention flag? What creates the strongest engagement vs weakest? Consider both pacing AND reader investment/immersion.
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3. **Character Revelation**: Where do we learn about characters through action/dialogue vs exposition? Which methods are most effective?
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4. **Tension Management**: How does tension build and release throughout? Where could it be better managed?
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5. **Reader Experience Balance**: Identify passages that could be enhanced for both efficiency AND enjoyment. Avoid suggesting cuts that sacrifice atmosphere, emotional grounding, or reader orientation for mere speed.
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Provide actionable, specific feedback with scene and line references where possible. Focus on problems that have clear solutions rather than subjective preferences.
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**Structure your response as:**
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- Brief analysis for each of the 5 craft lenses
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- Specific scene and line number references for suggested improvements
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- Priority ranking of suggested changes (highest impact first)
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- Concrete revision suggestions where appropriate
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Avoid subjective style preferences. Focus on craft elements that demonstrably affect reader experience and story function. Remember: the goal is prose that's both engaging AND purposeful, not just fast. Consider whether suggested changes enhance or diminish reader investment and emotional immersion.
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**Example Output:**
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- Multi-function scenes identified vs single-purpose areas
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- Specific scene and line ranges that could be tightened
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- Tension peaks/valleys with suggested improvements
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- Character revelation effectiveness analysis
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- Prioritized action items for revision
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