Text in brackets explains what you should write. ``` ## Scene [number and/or name] [One line synopsis] ### Plot **Story Arc Position** - [Where does this scene sit in the overall story arc progression?] **Scene Purpose** - [What is the purpose of this scene? Is it clear?] **Scene Arc** - [What is the beginning, middle, and end of the scene's arc? Is it clear?] **Scene Anchoring** - [Is this scene grounded in time, place, and circumstance?] **Hooks** - [Does this scene have clear entry and exit hooks? Are they effective?] **Tension** - [What creates suspense or unease? Is it sustained?] **Conflict** - [What is the central conflict in this scene? Is the premise strong or weak?] **Revelation** - [What is revealed in this scene, either to characters or the reader?] **Action/Sequel** - [Does the scene advance the plot or show reaction/reflection?] #### Plot Assessment [Scene strengths] [Scene weaknesses and areas for improvement] [Discuss pacing, flow, and length, if needed] [Discuss the tension, conflicts, and revelations. Are the organic, meaningful, well-timed and appropriate?] [Considering the above points, reflect on the scene's plot.] ### Characters **Characters Present** - [All characters present in the scene] **Primary POV** - [What perspective tells the scene? Was it consistant? Easy to follow?] **POV Goal** - [What does the primary POV character want to achieve in this scene?] **Plot Relation** - [Is that goal related to the plot? How (concise)?] **Consequences** - [What happens if the character fails to meet the goal?] **Impact** - [Which characters are impacted by this scene? How?] #### Character Assessment [Did the characters feel consistant in action and voice?] [Was the POV managed well? Were changes clear an unambiguous? Was the correct POV chosen?] [Were the character goals compelling?] [Considering the above points, reflect on how the character work in the scene.] ### Setting **Location** - [Where does the scene take place? Is that clear and specific?] **Time and Date** - [When does the scene take place? Is that clear and specific?] **Objects** - [What items, props, or details appear?] **Senses** - [What builds sensual atmosphere? Sight? Smell? Sound? Taste? Touch?] **Emotional Impact** - [How does the setting reinforce the scene's emotional tone?] **Weather** - [How does the weather support the scene? Was it omitted when it could have been useful?] ### Setting Assessment [Was the setting description balanced within the scene? Not too much or too little? Did it feel authentic? Clichéd?] [Did the setting enhance or distract?] [Considering the above points, reflect on the scene's setting and if it was used well, as well as any other thoughts about the setting.] ### Final Thoughts [Whatever you'd like to add about the scene, or omit the section if nothing comes to mind.] ```