--- description: Analyze character voice — consistency, distinctiveness, and development argument-hint: "[path, glob, or selection]" allowed-tools: [Read, Glob, Grep] --- Read the manuscript at `$ARGUMENTS` and analyze how distinct and consistent each character's voice is. Report findings to the conversation. ## What to analyze For each named character with meaningful dialogue: ### Speech profile - **Vocabulary** — formal/informal, technical/plain, characteristic word choices - **Sentence shape** — short/long, complete/fragmented, complex/simple - **Rhythm** — clipped, flowing, interrupted, deliberate - **Emotional register** — how they show anger, fear, affection, humor - **Background markers** — regional, generational, professional, cultural cues that appear in speech ### Consistency - Does the voice hold across scenes and chapters? - Does it adapt appropriately under stress, with different conversational partners, or across an arc — or does it slip and re-form without reason? - Does any growth in the character show up *in the voice* rather than only in the narration? ### Distinctiveness - Could a reader identify the speaker with the dialogue tags removed? Test by sampling unattributed lines. - Are any two characters bleeding into each other? Name the overlap. - Are any characters' voices so close to the narrator's that they don't stand out? ## Output format Per character (focus on the major ones): - **Voice profile** — 2-3 sentences capturing the signature - **Sample lines** — 2-3 quoted lines that exemplify the voice - **Consistency** — strong / mostly stable / drifts; cite the strongest example and any slip - **Distinctiveness** — distinctive / shared traits with [other character] / undifferentiated Close with: - **Overall assessment** — which voices are working, which need work - **Priority fixes** — three to five concrete suggestions ordered by impact